Originally Posted by payd2purv

What's the deal with these threads are we only allowed positive Good-Luck comments?

Or is constructive criticism allowed?


Interesting how you have completely removed your portfolio site? So I can't see who you have designed for or what you have done in the past. I am sure you most likely have a very impressive client list tho.


I did not get a warm fuzzy feeling from your tour. You have A LOT of competing sites with this style model. Also some of the girls you have can be found on many many other sites. I have even seen the same outfits on other sites.

As a surfer that would worry me because I don't want to sign up for your site if i've already seen that set elsewhere.

I don't get a real idea of what to expect in the members area.

I don't want to know I could get a "Ton" or "More"

I click a girl and it shows me 2 sets of what may be inside and you say "MANY MORE"

Well why not just show me all of the sets inside? I as a surfer go to assume you really only have those 2 sets inside and those 2 sets didn't spark an interest so i'm not going to sign up...

Don't limit yourself like that.

Your "Tour" really needs to be a TOUR of what is inside the members area.. Every girl.. Every set.. Exact numbers of how many of this or that.

The tour should have me almost busting in my pants with excitement..

The surfer should not need to focus and read to know what is waiting for them inside. I had to scroll to the very bottom of the screen to see what I could get in the members area and even that told me nothing...

I will add that most often numbers mean nothing the surfer will sign up because an image perks an interest.

How come when I click the girls labeled "Video Preview" I get a Video preview and some girls have a video and some just have pictures?

I was not sold.. I was not excited to see what is waiting for me in the members area..

Also if you designed your tour around the idea that you are marketing to the "Novice User" and they are inexperienced/ignorant you need to forget that thinking.. Who is the novice surfer today?

Personally I would have picked a different niche for a site right now.

I really love your style of design tho and the site does look great! Just needs a little work on the actual Marketing aspect.

Good Luck and Mad Respect!

P.S. Don't respond with flames. I don't care if you say you are a respected tour designer. I am giving my opinion specifically about this tour.