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I really don't mean to be rude, but are you serious?
That looks like someone did it in Frontpage 8 years ago, with images they nicked from an image library.
I love simple clean sites. I see what you are shooting for, but imho, you miss it by a long way.
The copy is also not great. Your first paragraph and main sales point is that your in depth experience means that client's jobs get done on time? Not really much of a sales point. That is really the LEAST I would expect!
You also have hyperbole in there. Good copy isn't the main thing to get traffic to a site, is it? A good domain, title tags and excellent links are as important, if not more important.
More visitors doesn't guarantee more cash. What if all the visitors are from china, or have no credit card?
Does "Native American" not mean like American Indian?
After Canadian you do not need the comma.
"to have your site rank(ing) well. "
(ing)? Really?
Sorry to sound harsh, but you asked for opinions. I wouldn't use you based on this site. The design looks homemade and the copywriting is weak, imho.
Obviously this is subjective and just my opinion. But you asked for it.
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