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Old 02-13-2010, 06:53 PM  
Amputate Your Head
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Originally Posted by Jack OAT View Post
Ok. You asked..

Logo is terrible...
flames are shit
toon is shit
can barely read the actual text
random red lines?

BUT, the version of the logo in the trailers is ok.

Header is WAY too big..
NO content at all above the fold.
Girls in the header were extracted shitty
whole thing just looks ugly (no call to action)

The French and English text is not a terrible idea, but confusing the way it's done.

The layout of the actual content isn't too bad, but if the header were done correctly, and the content moved up, then it could be organized a bit better.

People will probably say the surfers don't care about the logo, but that is your brand. Also the domain is eldiablo but the "el" in the logo is almost invisible. That shit needs to be clear so it sticks in their brains like a magnet.

I'm gonna hafta go ahead and sort of agree with that here. Yeah.

The other site, Patricia Petite, is possibly worse.

Bad logo
Bad color scheme
Atrocious typography
Bad layout
Bad image masking
Non-existent color correction
inconsistent effects (shadows)
Wanton abuse of the "Glow" filter
Bad random spacing of just about everything

I have to stop. It's burning my eyes.
Sorry, but the whole thing should be deleted with military grade prejudice and started over.

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