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AJHall · 11-01-2011, 08:24 PM

1) Try to fix the alignment of your join form. You have some stuff aligned right, some centered, nothing is uniform.

2) You may want to get a SSL cert and add the words "Your Transaction is 100% Secure" and maybe also say something above or below the form that you get instant access once you pay and that you can cancel anytime to ease fears.

3) Work your bonus sites into the reasons to join area and move it up on the page. Currently I had no idea it was there until I scrolled down.

4) Try to condense the text a bit more so your bullet points fit on 1 line. Example "New exclusive content added frequently." wraps to 2 lines. Your text is a bit redundant.

Suggestions:

"FREQUENT UPDATES! - New exclusive content added frequently." could be:
- Frequent Updates. We shoot new, 100% exclusive content every ___ days.

"HARD BALLBUSTING - Featuring some of the cruelest and sexiest babes on the planet!" could be:
"Hard Ballbusting action with the cruelest, sexiest babes."

"DOWNLOAD TO KEEP! - Download ALL of our movies to KEEP. Or simply stream tube style if you prefer." could be made into 2 short lines:
- Enjoy unlimited online viewing of streaming videos
- Download all of our movies and keep them forever

I hope this is helpful.

AJ

11-01-2011, 08:24 PM
AJHall Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Southern California Posts: 1,306	1) Try to fix the alignment of your join form. You have some stuff aligned right, some centered, nothing is uniform. 2) You may want to get a SSL cert and add the words "Your Transaction is 100% Secure" and maybe also say something above or below the form that you get instant access once you pay and that you can cancel anytime to ease fears. 3) Work your bonus sites into the reasons to join area and move it up on the page. Currently I had no idea it was there until I scrolled down. 4) Try to condense the text a bit more so your bullet points fit on 1 line. Example "New exclusive content added frequently." wraps to 2 lines. Your text is a bit redundant. Suggestions: "FREQUENT UPDATES! - New exclusive content added frequently." could be: - Frequent Updates. We shoot new, 100% exclusive content every ___ days. "HARD BALLBUSTING - Featuring some of the cruelest and sexiest babes on the planet!" could be: "Hard Ballbusting action with the cruelest, sexiest babes." "DOWNLOAD TO KEEP! - Download ALL of our movies to KEEP. Or simply stream tube style if you prefer." could be made into 2 short lines: - Enjoy unlimited online viewing of streaming videos - Download all of our movies and keep them forever I hope this is helpful. AJ __________________ Owner, Elevated X - The 4 Time Award Winning Adult CMS Software Company Used by More Than 2000 Adult Sites.