Dude, freestyle doesn't mean you just make up words and dribble into a mic with no flow.
A free has to be like a written in as far as it should
a) make sense
b) rhyme
c) flow
Your efforts do none of those basic requirements.
Yo Yo, avril avril avril
I'll date rape you with a thousand advil
And fuck you on an anvil
then put in in a landfill
YO! BRAP!
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