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I really like your site, good job.
However as a few other have said.. I would recommend that you make the site a little simpler.
The affiliate site looks as though there is way too much information in one area. You need to simplify it to grab a potential affiliate's attention.. otherwise they may just glance at your paragraphs and decide that its too much of a hassle to read.
If you have the funds you may want to think about investing in a copywriter which shouldn't be too expensive. You need to be able to GRAB attention and keep it
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