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Its because
- when I first enter that site I have no idea what the site is about.
Gentlemens Club? Solo Site? no idea really.
- Make the tour more simple.
- Put up some samples
- Check your wording properly. Gentlemens club? Why?
On your join page:
"When you join the Ariana Club, you are rewarding yourself with pampering luxury and numerous benefits, all complimented by a nearly limitless array of adult entertainment options. Our members are some of the most discerning individuals on the Internet, and you're about to take your place among their ranks"
Like what the hell are you trying to tell future members?
Overall I would say its kind of a mess. Keep in mind to keep it stupid simple (KISS). A surfer doesnt want to read all those texts, entice them with some sexy images and cut down on the texts.
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