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Old 12-11-2015, 09:44 AM  
Irv O. Neil
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Hi Guys

I invite feedback on my latest blog post, which is about spanking naked web cam models. The post is:

=> Free Sex Stories about Spanking Naked Women

What do you think about the article?

Is this the right kind of article to be writing to get traffic to LiveJasmin?

Do you have any suggestions for improving the article?

What other topics do you think I should write about?

I welcome any feedback. Thanks.
It was a horny little piece. It did the job and made me click over to see the webcam girls, which is what you want. I think the very simplistic site is okay, although photos would make it more pleasing to the eye. Maybe some photos that express the theme of the particular article, in this case, spanking. A pic of a girl bent over a desk, for example.

Although I do agree with what Mediamix said, to take out the "Just another Wordpress Site" line.
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