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Old 05-31-2016, 02:40 PM  
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1. You need to set up a website/blog. Then add these vids with text to posts.

2. The colour looks dreadful on the vids. It looks like red has been turned up too high. It made me feel like you were on Mars. It made it hard to watch the vids.

3. Use a proper mic. When you speak into the camera it sounds like your using the one on the camera. It sounds poor. I decent mic is not expensive and would make things sound 100% better.

4. Interview people.

5. Personally I would rather look at pics when it comes to fashion. If It was me I would have also pics on your site. Plus how much things cost.

6. I am not keen on the camera shoots. Some shots seem shaky, and other shots are too high up. Something like this needs some pro camera work. Your trying to be classy, but it feels too amateurish.

If you take this film: https://youtu.be/PeWoHrbDemM

Its soooo dark and blue, you can hardly see what the model is wearing.
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