How does my new dvd cover look? Queen of the hood (girl fights, not porn) - GoFuckYourself.com

wtfent · 04-16-2010, 07:11 PM

I just wasn't feeling the design my design guys were bringing to the table so I did it myself. What do you think? Good or bad, please critique

BigRod · 04-16-2010, 07:53 PM

Not bad at all. You might want to change the front picture to a close up.

CaptainHowdy · 04-16-2010, 08:24 PM

Looks really good...

Playboy-Deak · 04-16-2010, 09:22 PM

I like it!

It got that gutta feel to it and thats what u trying to accomplish...

bigpappa17934 · 04-16-2010, 09:24 PM

Looks like something that I would rent and just say...WHAT THE FUCK the whole time.... Not sure if you are going for that...but if you are....then it is PERFECT!

Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life · 04-16-2010, 09:24 PM

i don't know if my idea is gonna be conveyed well by my words, but if you could like, brick out around the edges of the video, you know, like it looks like a broken out chunk of brickwall over the screencap, instead of the screencap over the brick. might look kinda cool.

Riffhard · 04-16-2010, 09:52 PM

Ha! I like it. Do you sell your DVD's through your website alone?

Spunky · 04-16-2010, 09:56 PM

I'm digging it,not bad at all

wyldblyss · 04-16-2010, 10:03 PM

It's not doing anything for me. I mean, I wouldn't watch it, even for free. If it is chick fighting you are selling, then concentrate on the "chick part" and get a better picture that conveys more girlie cat fight than dyke fight. (no disrespect to anyone intended). You don't have to wear a dress, and it doesn't even have to be a shot from the video, it could be a shot you recreate to insure you are both looking like you are girls and see some face. The rest of the cover, I ignore, just because I always ignore that other stuff normally.

jackknoff · 04-16-2010, 10:41 PM

wow, that's like bumfights, but with chicks... Do they kiss and make out err up afterwards? That would be HAWT! On another note, what are you doing to promote said site?

Spanx!
Jack

MrWho · 04-17-2010, 01:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Angry Jew Cat

i don't know if my idea is gonna be conveyed well by my words, but if you could like, brick out around the edges of the video, you know, like it looks like a broken out chunk of brickwall over the screencap, instead of the screencap over the brick. might look kinda cool.

Yes, I will underline this. The cover looks very good matching the content perfect I think.
But the video picture with it's sharp, clear edges doesn't fit well.

Beside this good job

Arnox · 04-17-2010, 01:50 AM

Grammar could definitely be improved but overall, I guess it's okay.

LoveSandra · 04-17-2010, 02:35 AM

Looks good

Raf1 · 04-17-2010, 03:20 AM

not my kind of thing, but it looks pretty well done

TrainWreckContent · 04-17-2010, 03:41 AM

i like it good luck with it

Konkan · 04-17-2010, 05:32 AM

your cover looks great, good luck with sales

amacontent · 04-17-2010, 11:19 AM

Way to clutterred. Theres too much going on and the potential buyer will get a headache trying to look at it. Make it easier on the eyes

wtfent · 04-17-2010, 07:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BigRod

Not bad at all. You might want to change the front picture to a close up.

I will give that a try.

wtfent · 04-17-2010, 07:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Angry Jew Cat

i don't know if my idea is gonna be conveyed well by my words, but if you could like, brick out around the edges of the video, you know, like it looks like a broken out chunk of brickwall over the screencap, instead of the screencap over the brick. might look kinda cool.

Im going to play around with this idea as well, not a bad idea.

wtfent · 04-17-2010, 07:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Riffhard

Ha! I like it. Do you sell your DVD's through your website alone?

We have a few distribution deals as well. Most of our dvds can be found on bestbuy.com, amazon, and any major retailer websites etc... the major chains have not really been giving us much love latel in their actual retail locations though.

wtfent · 04-17-2010, 07:10 PM

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Originally Posted by Arnox

Grammar could definitely be improved but overall, I guess it's okay.

Can you please be so kind to point out how we can improve on the grammar, I didn't see anything wrong myself but I am no english teacher.

DBS.US · 04-17-2010, 07:11 PM

Why do you have a "Proof of purchase"?

NaughtyRob · 04-17-2010, 07:31 PM

Looks good but I don't like the front cover pic.

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Angry Jew Cat - Banned for Life (felis madjewicus) Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In Mom & Dad's Basement Posts: 20,368	i don't know if my idea is gonna be conveyed well by my words, but if you could like, brick out around the edges of the video, you know, like it looks like a broken out chunk of brickwall over the screencap, instead of the screencap over the brick. might look kinda cool.

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04-16-2010, 10:03 PM	#9
wyldblyss Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: The Buck Starts Here Posts: 5,779	It's not doing anything for me. I mean, I wouldn't watch it, even for free. If it is chick fighting you are selling, then concentrate on the "chick part" and get a better picture that conveys more girlie cat fight than dyke fight. (no disrespect to anyone intended). You don't have to wear a dress, and it doesn't even have to be a shot from the video, it could be a shot you recreate to insure you are both looking like you are girls and see some face. The rest of the cover, I ignore, just because I always ignore that other stuff normally.

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jackknoff Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 545	wow, that's like bumfights, but with chicks... Do they kiss and make out err up afterwards? That would be HAWT! On another note, what are you doing to promote said site? Spanx! Jack

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