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Larry Vee · 10-10-2017, 02:40 AM

I've applied for about 5 positions looking for help. Out of those I've had 2 that wanted my native language to be English, which it is, but they seem to think I'm 'Indian'. Why has be baffled. They don't have the time to change my so called 'language'. I was born in the outskirts of Tampa, Florida of the U.S.A. and have been here for 61 yrs.
Just wanting others opinions on if my wording isn't 'English'.
What yall think?

Samples
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First Lesson

As I stood in the doorway of my first year college step-daughters bedroom, my shower wrap was over my feet, my hand was rubbing my big tit while the other was petting my sizzling pussy.
There on her bed her head was between some young guys spread legs, her hands were around the base of his cock, her mouth stretched around the first few inches and her head bobbing on the thick long dick. The guy had her head in his hands, trying to bob it faster and further down.
I knelt beside her, gently pushed her young head aside, and took the hard thick cock all the way in my mouth running my clasped mature lips up and down his shaft, my tongue twirling around it.
With her laying there beside me with a horrific yet surprised look the guy began to groan. It wasn't even a minute and my mouth was sucking the hot salty cum off the convulsing rod in my moving mouth.
when his cum stopped squirting I pulled my mouth off his still erect dick and reached over behind Joan's head pulled it to me and with cum dripping from my sticky lips I kissed her soft lips and slipped my tongue in her mouth and let her taste the cum reward.
I couldn't resist but to keep one hand around his wet dick and jack it, my hand reached to one of her small tits and covered it with my other hand.
She moaned and let out a scream around my tongue when her orgasm hit her. He shot cum out and covered his shaft and my hand as he growled.
I pulled my face away, slipped both hands between her firm thighs, and dove my face on her pussy. A low yelp come from her mouth as my lips sucked in her juices.
She took his cum coated cock in her mouth and as I ate her out she gave him a decent blow job.
I had 3 fingers deep inside my sloppy pussy pumping, her swollen pussy lips still in my tonguing mouth.
I believe her muffled groan come from her mouth filled with dick first as he cum yet again and I couldn't hold back anymore and bit her clit as I pinched mine and my juice flowed out.
We left the guy there on the bed as I led her to the shower so we could introduce our hot bodies to each other even more.
.................................................
The Manager

A long day in a corporate meeting, dinner and drinks and I ended up in my department managers room.

His fingers spread my pussy lips wide when he pushed 2 fingers inside and teased the inside of me. His fingers knew just how to tease my clit.

When I couldn't stand it anymore I whispered in a sexy voice to eat me.

With luscious strokes he licked my outer lips and then the inside, paying special attention to my erect clit. I was so wet now that my yummy liquid was drooling out and down to the crack of my butt. All the time my eyes admired his huge hunk of meat between his hairy legs. It wasn't even fully erect yet, it was going to be at least a good 11 inches when it was totally hard. I quivered just knowing it was going to be inside me.

I pushed and pulled on him until we were in a 69 position I laid there on top of him and took the monster dick in my hands, it was hard as a rock now and my two hands just did wrap around the thick base. My tongue licked the precum from the massive head. My lips were stretched wide when I slipped my mouth over the huge tip and started down the thick shaft. I took it slow moving my mouth so I wouldn't gag.

It wasn't the easiest to do with him eating out my pussy like it had never been. my orgasms were coming one after another in his hungry mouth, but I kept my moving and was slowly getting more and more of the monster in my mouth as my hands stroked and twisted around the now slobber covered shaft. I bobbed my head until the huge head touched the back of my throat, there was a good 3 or 4 inches of twitching meat still left.

When he groaned into my juicy pussy, I was no way ready for the huge load of hot cum that shot from his dick. I swallowed and swallowed trying to get down as much as I could, but it still flowed pasted my gripping lips.

He rolled me off him, turned, and guided his massive hunk of dick between my stretched wet thighs. I wanted it in me bad and knew it was going to stretch my pussy to almost the splitting point, but I wanted it.

I gasped as the engorged head push through my lips and up inside me. He took it slow, almost to slow for me, but knew he didn't want it to hurt no more then it was going to. It was stretching alright, a bit discomfort but more thrill then pain. He continued until it felt like his dick was going to bust up into my stomach.

He twisted his hips and bucked around as he fuck me. He was driving me crazy, I couldn't do anything but lay there screeching and wiggling under him. Orgasm after orgasm poured from me. It seemed like an eternity before he growled and cum. his load was so huge I could feel my deep insides swell. He fucked me for over an hour non-stop, his stamina was unbelievable, he never slowed, except for each time he filled my pussy, I'm not sure how many times he did, I only know there was no way I kept count of how many explosive orgasms I experienced during that time.

So as not to get caught in the morning, he sent me waddling down the hall to my room. I fell exhausted on the bed in my hotel room, cum coated face and inner thighs, but with a devilish satisfied smile.

Ty

ContentBay · 10-10-2017, 02:54 AM

"As I stood in the doorway of my first year college step-daughters bedroom"

...daughter's ....

"A low yelp come from her mouth as my"

....It's not come, it's came...

I'd assume the same thing buddy. Even when u have perfect grammar they want the "American expressionism".

Keep fighting the good fight bud.

Larry Vee · 10-10-2017, 03:55 AM

Guess I forgot about the spelling and grammar check on my MS Word

HairyChick · 10-10-2017, 05:38 PM

Punctuation, spelling and grammar need fixing.

Larry Vee · 10-11-2017, 12:06 AM

Thanks

I ran them through with the spelling and grammer check and see I definitely made mistakes.

Larry Vee · 10-11-2017, 03:31 AM

Curious, other then the spelling and grammar mistakes, what is your opinion on my stories.

RadiantX · 10-11-2017, 05:03 AM

I'll be honest, my gut feeling is that English isn't your native language. It's good, but there are definitely some descriptions and terms in there that most Americans just don't use. Good luck though, not everyone is picky.

Larry Vee · 10-11-2017, 06:48 AM

Maybe it's my southern redneck cracker slang getting in the way. Never had a problem with it back when I was writing before.

My native language is 'English'!

Don't even know any other language words, except si, taco, tortilla, puta.

10-10-2017, 02:40 AM	#1
Larry Vee Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2017 Location: Out in the sticks of Seffner Fl. USA Posts: 46	Confused I've applied for about 5 positions looking for help. Out of those I've had 2 that wanted my native language to be English, which it is, but they seem to think I'm 'Indian'. Why has be baffled. They don't have the time to change my so called 'language'. I was born in the outskirts of Tampa, Florida of the U.S.A. and have been here for 61 yrs. Just wanting others opinions on if my wording isn't 'English'. What yall think? Samples ............................................ First Lesson As I stood in the doorway of my first year college step-daughters bedroom, my shower wrap was over my feet, my hand was rubbing my big tit while the other was petting my sizzling pussy. There on her bed her head was between some young guys spread legs, her hands were around the base of his cock, her mouth stretched around the first few inches and her head bobbing on the thick long dick. The guy had her head in his hands, trying to bob it faster and further down. I knelt beside her, gently pushed her young head aside, and took the hard thick cock all the way in my mouth running my clasped mature lips up and down his shaft, my tongue twirling around it. With her laying there beside me with a horrific yet surprised look the guy began to groan. It wasn't even a minute and my mouth was sucking the hot salty cum off the convulsing rod in my moving mouth. when his cum stopped squirting I pulled my mouth off his still erect dick and reached over behind Joan's head pulled it to me and with cum dripping from my sticky lips I kissed her soft lips and slipped my tongue in her mouth and let her taste the cum reward. I couldn't resist but to keep one hand around his wet dick and jack it, my hand reached to one of her small tits and covered it with my other hand. She moaned and let out a scream around my tongue when her orgasm hit her. He shot cum out and covered his shaft and my hand as he growled. I pulled my face away, slipped both hands between her firm thighs, and dove my face on her pussy. A low yelp come from her mouth as my lips sucked in her juices. She took his cum coated cock in her mouth and as I ate her out she gave him a decent blow job. I had 3 fingers deep inside my sloppy pussy pumping, her swollen pussy lips still in my tonguing mouth. I believe her muffled groan come from her mouth filled with dick first as he cum yet again and I couldn't hold back anymore and bit her clit as I pinched mine and my juice flowed out. We left the guy there on the bed as I led her to the shower so we could introduce our hot bodies to each other even more. ................................................. The Manager A long day in a corporate meeting, dinner and drinks and I ended up in my department managers room. His fingers spread my pussy lips wide when he pushed 2 fingers inside and teased the inside of me. His fingers knew just how to tease my clit. When I couldn't stand it anymore I whispered in a sexy voice to eat me. With luscious strokes he licked my outer lips and then the inside, paying special attention to my erect clit. I was so wet now that my yummy liquid was drooling out and down to the crack of my butt. All the time my eyes admired his huge hunk of meat between his hairy legs. It wasn't even fully erect yet, it was going to be at least a good 11 inches when it was totally hard. I quivered just knowing it was going to be inside me. I pushed and pulled on him until we were in a 69 position I laid there on top of him and took the monster dick in my hands, it was hard as a rock now and my two hands just did wrap around the thick base. My tongue licked the precum from the massive head. My lips were stretched wide when I slipped my mouth over the huge tip and started down the thick shaft. I took it slow moving my mouth so I wouldn't gag. It wasn't the easiest to do with him eating out my pussy like it had never been. my orgasms were coming one after another in his hungry mouth, but I kept my moving and was slowly getting more and more of the monster in my mouth as my hands stroked and twisted around the now slobber covered shaft. I bobbed my head until the huge head touched the back of my throat, there was a good 3 or 4 inches of twitching meat still left. When he groaned into my juicy pussy, I was no way ready for the huge load of hot cum that shot from his dick. I swallowed and swallowed trying to get down as much as I could, but it still flowed pasted my gripping lips. He rolled me off him, turned, and guided his massive hunk of dick between my stretched wet thighs. I wanted it in me bad and knew it was going to stretch my pussy to almost the splitting point, but I wanted it. I gasped as the engorged head push through my lips and up inside me. He took it slow, almost to slow for me, but knew he didn't want it to hurt no more then it was going to. It was stretching alright, a bit discomfort but more thrill then pain. He continued until it felt like his dick was going to bust up into my stomach. He twisted his hips and bucked around as he fuck me. He was driving me crazy, I couldn't do anything but lay there screeching and wiggling under him. Orgasm after orgasm poured from me. It seemed like an eternity before he growled and cum. his load was so huge I could feel my deep insides swell. He fucked me for over an hour non-stop, his stamina was unbelievable, he never slowed, except for each time he filled my pussy, I'm not sure how many times he did, I only know there was no way I kept count of how many explosive orgasms I experienced during that time. So as not to get caught in the morning, he sent me waddling down the hall to my room. I fell exhausted on the bed in my hotel room, cum coated face and inner thighs, but with a devilish satisfied smile. Ty

10-10-2017, 02:54 AM	#2
ContentBay Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2015 Location: Online Posts: 389	"As I stood in the doorway of my first year college step-daughters bedroom" ...daughter's .... "A low yelp come from her mouth as my" ....It's not come, it's came... I'd assume the same thing buddy. Even when u have perfect grammar they want the "American expressionism". Keep fighting the good fight bud. __________________ Skype: Contentbay Telegram: @Contentbay E-mail: [email protected] For Writing Services https://gfy.com/gfy-jobs-and-service...easy-step.html

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10-11-2017, 05:03 AM	#7
RadiantX Confirmed User Join Date: May 2005 Location: FL Posts: 545	I'll be honest, my gut feeling is that English isn't your native language. It's good, but there are definitely some descriptions and terms in there that most Americans just don't use. Good luck though, not everyone is picky. __________________ -------------------- ICQ: 162022652

10-10-2017, 03:55 AM	#3
Larry Vee Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2017 Location: Out in the sticks of Seffner Fl. USA Posts: 46	Guess I forgot about the spelling and grammar check on my MS Word

10-11-2017, 12:06 AM	#5
Larry Vee Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2017 Location: Out in the sticks of Seffner Fl. USA Posts: 46	Thanks I ran them through with the spelling and grammer check and see I definitely made mistakes.

10-11-2017, 03:31 AM	#6
Larry Vee Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2017 Location: Out in the sticks of Seffner Fl. USA Posts: 46	Curious, other then the spelling and grammar mistakes, what is your opinion on my stories.

10-11-2017, 06:48 AM	#8
Larry Vee Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2017 Location: Out in the sticks of Seffner Fl. USA Posts: 46	Maybe it's my southern redneck cracker slang getting in the way. Never had a problem with it back when I was writing before. My native language is 'English'! Don't even know any other language words, except si, taco, tortilla, puta.