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Script for our next movie
Script for our next movie, any suggestions?
Two girls, only solo level, one day shoot... A JUNG GIRL Psychiatrist Room HELEN lies on a dark Psychiatrist couch, in a dark room. She nervously touches her face and body. Helen I remember as a child showing a boy... WOODS DAY EXT HELEN walks into bushes and there she hesitates. HELEN shows her breasts to the camera, then her bottom and pussy. PSYCHIATRIST ROOM PSYCHIATRIST Black HELEN White PSYCHIATRIST Day HELEN Blackness PSYCHIATRIST Girl HELEN Naked PSYCHIATRIST Drink HELEN Naked COCKTAIL BAR HELEN is sitting at the bar a BAR WOMAN pours her a drink, HELEN's dress disappears, BARMAN pours another drink, HELEN's clothes disappear until all her clothes have gone and she is naked PSYCHIATRIST ROOM HELEN My father used to spank me ROOM INT NIGHT In black and white old cinema style, HELEN pulls up her dress and down her knickers and bends over PSYCHIATRIST ROOM HELEN I love looking at myself ROOM INT NIGHT HELEN Looking at herself in the mirror dressed just in knickers and bra, she undresses and dresses. PSYCHIATRIST ROOM HELEN I had this dream where I am in prison Prison Cell DAY INT MAGDA enters the cell and orders HELEN to undress. HELEN slowly undresses. MAGDA washes HELEN with a sponge and dries her off. MAGDA handcuffs HELEN against the bars. PSYCHIATRIST ROOM HELEN Then this other dream I am in a doctors surgery DOCTORS ROOM INT HELEN is striped and put in a gynecological chair. We see HELEN's face as the suction vibrator comes closer, we see the vibrator and then HELEN's pussy, MAGDA's face, MAGDA attaches a suction vibrator to HELEN's pussy. HELEN clamps on vibrators to her nipples, MAGDA switches the vibrators on. PSYCHIATRIST ROOM HELEN gets up, puts on her coat and leaves. PSYCHIATRIST Same time next week |
Are you looking for casting suggestions?
Lou Charmelle, Angell Summers, or Liza del Sierra would be great. |
looks pretty boring, if its porn. Here's a good script for you to shoot.
White room 20 super hot girls pour oil all over themselves and caress each other's juicy, round butts. They all make a giant pile in the middle of the room. One guy with a 10 inch dick walks in and jumps on the pile, sticking it in any open hole he can find. He shoots 5 loads. The end. |
When she gets up to leave the psychiatrists office have a wet stain on the chair/couch.
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TGITC would buy it then. |
Personally I don't like dreamscapes in porn. I think that by doing so and cutting back forth from the dream/memory to the present breaks the action up too much and diverts attention away from what the viewer wants to see. Also, dreamscapes in porn suck because it's a fantasy within a fantasy for the viewer. The viewer is already placing themselves into their own fantasy by watching. They are trying to make it as real for them as possible. To find out you're in someone else's fantasy makes it seem "less real" (if that makes sense).
I was board so I changed it a bit. Not finished or polished. Like I said, I was bored so here is a read for you: __________________________________________ OPENING BLACK SCREEN: The sound of a woman walking in high heels at a normal pace is heard. (click click click click click click click) The sound suddenly stops. HELLEN Uggghhh...(sighing) OUTSIDE HOTEL LOUNGE: The camera opens focused on Hellen's broken red high heel shoe and slowly pans up her body. (Hellen wearing business attire with skirt) CUT TO: INSIDE HOTEL LOUNGE: Hellen sitting at the bar on a stool with her foot on her knee rubbing her foot. The broken shoe atop the bar. Magda Rough day, hon? (sitting on stool next to Hellen) hellen Almost in tears looking at magda nods her head in agreement MAGDA Must be a man. They'll do that to you. hellen Yup. I hate them. I'm done with them. (quickly wipes tear from her cheek) MAGDA Awww. I'm right there with you, hon. (turns body towards Hellen and begins caressing her shoeless foot) MAGDA We've all been there, hon. It get's better. HELLEN It's not so much him. I really liked these shoes. It's just one of those days where nothing seems to (turns to grab her glass of wine and spills it on her shirt) HELLEN Ugh. (frustrated sigh) Seems to go right. MAGDA Oh dear! The two women look at each other, pause and then laugh. Magda grabs Hellen's hand. MAGDA Come on, hon. I have a beautiful blouse you can wear. The two get up and walk to the exit. A sexy walk with their tight round asses bouncing from side to side. Both women are in short business skirts and Hellen is shoeless. The camera is focused on theirasses. CUT TO: Magda and Hellen walking down the hotel hallway towards Magda's room. Magda holding Hellen's hand. MAGDA When I have a bad day I do something I would't normally do. Something crazy. HELLEN I don't understand. MAGDA You know, something rebellious. Something taboo. Live out a fantasy. Break the rules. The two are at the door of the hotel room. Hellen stares at Magda with wonderment and curiosity as Magda is opening the door. CUT TO: Inside hotel room. Two beds inside the room. Magda is sitting on one bed and Hellen is sitting on the other. They are facing each other. |
Shame there is no sex in your movie, it would be a 12 certificate.
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Like I said, I didn't finish it. Think you can see where it was heading though. Was just trying to throw some ideas out there for you since you asked for suggestions.
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Of course showing the opposite in a funny way..... |
The Set
Choosing our studio sets...
http://www.cinemaerotique.com/pp/jung/couch.jpg http://www.cinemaerotique.com/pp/jung/cell.jpg http://www.cinemaerotique.com/pp/jung/Gyno.jpg http://www.cinemaerotique.com/pp/jung/bar.jpg http://www.cinemaerotique.com/pp/jung/tied.jpg And the actors ..... http://www.cinemaerotique.com/pp/jung/Melinda4.jpg http://www.cinemaerotique.com/pp/jung/Monika.jpg |
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