Critique My Blog Post on Spanking Webcam Girls
 

Hi Guys

I know my blog still needs some design flair, but can I have your comments on my writing in this blog post entitled Naked Girl Spanking via Nude Webcam Chat. Do you think it's ok, or is there room for improvement? Do you think I might be able to get blog posts like this ranked in the search engines?

Thanks

copy and pasted it to my cash advance/mesothelioma blog. thanks OP

no one will read that pile of text

NO ONE.

EVER.

TRUST ME.

Bounce rate? :)

Needs more cowbell.

need gun to shoot self

Well, I guess I largely agree, but you never know. What I am trying to do is get a lot text content onto the blog.

Need more paragraphs.

You need to combine the text with videos and photos you can also put some banners too , usually people who are searching for naked live girls do not want to read a long story they need to see naked girls !

isn't this the exact same post you asked about last week and got the same responses?

That site is as appealing as anal cancer.

Post photos relevant to the subject matter and someone MIGHT read some of the text.

I will give you one hint:

Texts that are about naked girls need
... well ...

N A K E D G I R L S

toooooooomuchtextttttttttt

Way too much text.

No pics.

And not easy (the theme) on my eyes.