cartoon: your comments are necessary to me.
 

Hi All :)

We are start drawing cartoon.
here: http://www.best-studios.com/cartoon/index.html first 6 pictures.
Please, tell me what you think.

thanks in advance! :)

your sig makes me hard

more artistic than erotic, but maybe that's your goal

sorry :) I change it.

but, what you think about pictures, maybe you have some suggestions?

thank you!

To my opinion, should be more realistic. Now it looks more like dolls

Intersting

it's first pictures, so I'am very need in your comments now.

thank you guys! :)

Either make it more cartoony or more realistic... right now it's in between... :2 cents:

Hey, keep up the good work.

they're cute. maybe i'm just not that into cartoons but they don't do alot for me.

i like the style of the first two.

after that they get a little no-so-good

i agree more realistic if possible

thank you for the comment, I'll try :)

thank you for the kind words :)

it's a first cartoons, I hope, I will make it much better very soon.



also, maybe somebody know any good cartoon tutorials?
I know this:
http://www.polykarbon.com/tutorials/index.htm

cartoons aren't my fetish, but the artistic creation is great:thumbsup

They're better than most, you can improve the linework make the black lines crisper, less faded looking.

Keep at it, looks like real potential.

not good, sorry :(

you should try working on it a bit more .. the shadows are not well done .. the face of the guy jerking off is also deformed and that's because of the sadows too.. but overall it's not bad for a start
good luck

looks good for a first timer

I"m sorry i didnt get any erection :winkwink:
but looks good even if i am not a cartoon fan.

I usually get hard if the wind blows, but your pics did nothing for me. They need to be more detailed, relastic, or more like a toon. RIght now they are artsy.

Your not trying to get them put on walls, your trying to get them on monitors.

Really, I like the characters. They're uniqe and should be catchy if you can get the art right.


Good luck!


SkyB0lt

thank you for all your comments and suggestions,
it helps me to make next cartoons better! :)


Anybody knows good sites with cartoon tutorials?
please post url's. :)


thank you! :)

Looks original:thumbsup