(industrial & EBM) need some feedback (mp3)
 

if you are into that kind of music, i would like to get some feedback from you.
today i started that song. it needs some mixing and the samples will be re arranged aswell as the vocals.

but you get a picture of the song if you listen to it.

http://www.misantrophe.de/zeritas/au...-untergang.mp3

thank you

ps. warning: if you are not into ebm & industrial, you might hurt your ears :)

i like it.

Fairly good, but it kinda lacks a punch. The sound has no darkness, aggression or threat in it, but it isn't really catchy either. Right now it comes across like Funker Vogt without the aggression or Front 242 without the dark appeal.
Quite frankly, it's a little bit boring right now. It would have potential, though, if you'd add a bit of spice.