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Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE 02-18-2009 07:10 PM

Ok, What do you think of this song..? AGAIN!
 
First time there was a audio issue... It is fixed and is much clearer now.. Also note, this song is not the final..



Thanks for your input..

candyflip 02-18-2009 07:12 PM

I'm willing to bet you get the same feedback. :1orglaugh

WarChild 02-18-2009 07:13 PM

You're a failure of epic levels.

candyflip 02-18-2009 07:18 PM

I see I have already been proven correct.

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE 02-18-2009 07:24 PM

Thanks for the feedback...

420 02-18-2009 07:26 PM

Is that Mindwaste aka T-Rain mumbling on there?

spacedog 02-18-2009 08:48 PM

take out the vocals and it'll sound much better..

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE 02-18-2009 10:11 PM

Great feedback.. Bump for more..

Poindexterity 02-18-2009 10:50 PM

YOU DID ME WRONG!!!

i liked it except for the early 80's amateur miami
producer stock keyboard sounds beat.
that and the same ol same ol
commercial fronting and rhymin common rhymes
like this how far we go and i gotta let you know
and yadda yadda yadda

and the fact that the cell phone ring is the loudest thing in the whole song.

yeah, total butt pee to be brief.

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE 02-18-2009 11:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Poindexterity (Post 15520765)
YOU DID ME WRONG!!!

i liked it except for the early 80's amateur miami
producer stock keyboard sounds beat.
that and the same ol same ol
commercial fronting and rhymin common rhymes
like this how far we go and i gotta let you know
and yadda yadda yadda

and the fact that the cell phone ring is the loudest thing in the whole song.

yeah, total butt pee to be brief.

Great input.. Thanks :thumbsup

ExLust 02-19-2009 12:43 AM

Hhahaha, bump for more.

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE 02-19-2009 01:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ExLust (Post 15520924)
Hhahaha, bump for more.

Thanks for the bump...

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE 02-19-2009 04:06 AM

bump.. bump...

nico-t 02-19-2009 05:59 AM

t-rain is way better you shoud sign him

nico-t 02-19-2009 06:05 AM

i used to be better than all of you btw: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...m?bandID=37427

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE 02-19-2009 06:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by nico-t (Post 15521380)
t-rain is way better you shoud sign him

:1orglaugh:1orglaugh:1orglaugh

Quote:

Originally Posted by nico-t (Post 15521396)
i used to be better than all of you btw: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...m?bandID=37427

Not bad..

munki 02-19-2009 06:36 AM

I think I like this one:


Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE 02-19-2009 08:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by munki (Post 15521462)
I think I like this one:


:thumbsup:thumbsup

tranza 02-19-2009 10:18 AM

Fail thread

$5 submissions 02-19-2009 06:02 PM

The keyboards didn't do it for me.

Si 02-19-2009 06:07 PM

that is fucking terrible!

I hope your not really thinking of pushing this shit

candyflip 02-19-2009 06:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mobilefun1987 (Post 15524292)
that is fucking terrible!

I hope your not really thinking of pushing this shit

Wot u talkin' bout? That is some major label shit right there.

It even says so on his MySpace.

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE 02-19-2009 07:07 PM

Thanks for all the feedback.. I can't wait to show Nonsentz..



Looks like we need the beat redone... Him to work on sounding less commercial.. And work with his tonality a bit...


Keep them coming guys... Nonsentz needs this criticism... Everyone locally thinks he is the hottest thing around and hardly criticizes him...


It was funny cause we were talking about it the other day.. I told him I am going to post that song a place were critics will come out by the dozens..

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE 02-19-2009 10:29 PM

The feedback was perfect.. We welcome more.. I showed this thread to Nonsentz.. He loved the criticism.. Just what he needs..


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