Would love some feedback on my first couple of clips
 

Hi there,

I guess since this is my first post I should introduce myself, huh? My name is Chris and I am a 20 year old college student living in St. Petersburg, Fl (God's waiting room...hoping to move to Miami soon). I've always enjoyed looking at porn, and I've always understood that the monetary potential in porn is huge, so I decided to do some research and become involved in the industry.

My main goal is to own and run my own paysite, an amateur all-girl site much like mattsmodels.com. Realizing how many paysites are already out there, I'm hoping to attract a more loyal and dedicated fanbase by adding a forum and a blog, and host contests and webcam shows regularly. I'd sell DVD's through the site as well.

I'm not really planning on starting on the paysite anytime soon since I don't have the money to invest or the education to back up the risk. For now I am making money through VOD sites like clips4sale and clipclinic, as well as selling DVD's through the various auction sites. It allows me to profit without investing too much money. I put some teasers on youtube, which drives a lot of traffic to my site. Trouble is that the clips usually get deleted at around 30,000 views (I've gotten as high as 175,000 before though). Using this system I can make anywhere from $300 - $600 per month. I know it's not that much to most of you, but it pays my rent. :thumbsup

Anyway, here's one of the teasers. I would love to know what you think of it and if you have any suggestions on how to make it better. I think they came out very well considering my equipment cost me less than a grand - $500 for a Canon HV-20 + $30 wide angle lens + $50 shotgun mic + $100 lighting.

My main beef is the sound quality. There's a lot of background camera noise. If anyone has any tips on how to get rid of it I'd much appreciate it. Clips are edited using Pinnacle Studio 12 :Oh crap

youtube .com/watch?v=xJE0TejRNwc (I can't post URL's until I've made 50 posts :winkwink:

hey ,! welcome and good luck!;)

https://youtube.com/watch?v=xJE0TejRNwc

Looks good, nice quality, good looking amateur girls, I like it.

good work there, the girls seem to really enjoy this great work :)

welcome to the boards! :)

Thanks guys! Positive feedback is always good for morale and motivation. And yeah, I usually allow the girls to pick their own partners for the scene...it makes for better chemistry. :thumbsup

Nice video, can't wait to find out how the story ends :1orglaugh
Hello and welcome to the board

Thanks for the replies. Unfortunately my videos as well as my account was deleted this morning....

Back with a new account!

https://youtube.com/watch?v=ibMK5VKYtX4

I was able to get rid of most of the background noise using adobe audition.

I dig the amateur kinda look to it ... but with that kind of a camera might it be better for the girls to interact with it? eg: "BOB WHY ARE YOU FILMING?!" etc? just a thought.

Good work!

Thanks ascii. I'm actually planning on the next scene to feature 3 girls shooting themselves and each other, making it look like they're just friends screwing around. Great minds...

Looks OK, just watch the shadows when you video.

Already removed. :(