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lorsha · 02-28-2003, 04:55 PM

Hi everyone lorsha here from lorshasworld.com

My hubby has changed our main page, and I would appreciate any feedback that any of you have.

http://www.lorshasworld.com/main.htm

Thanks so much!

Lorsha

TheJimmy · 02-28-2003, 04:57 PM

I'm a fan of the amateur facial niche....

but one thing I remember that is not on this version, is the image where you have some 'rope' laid down streaking across and into your hair, that was a real 'dirty dirty' pic....

I'd add that back somewhere, other than that you got that 'amateur' facial site going on...

should work just fine I'd imagine...

lorsha · 02-28-2003, 04:59 PM

Thanks Jimmy, but I don't know what pic you mean!

Could you maybe try to explain that one better. I don't have any with any kind of rope in my hair, hehe!

Lorsha

candyflip · 02-28-2003, 05:03 PM

I remember the pic Jimmy

Anyhow...I'm on my Powerbook at the momnet, and the page doesn't look so hot. Some of the text from some table rows are being displayed in (overtop of) other table rows. Just a big jumbled mess.

I like where you're going with it, just take a look at what I said...

I'm using IE 5.1 for Mac OS9

JeremySF · 02-28-2003, 05:04 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by lorsha
Hi everyone lorsha here from lorshasworld.com

My hubby has changed our main page, and I would appreciate any feedback that any of you have.

http://www.lorshasworld.com/main.htm

Thanks so much!

Lorsha

WAY TOO MANY EXITS....

Aside from that, in terms of design, it's a little to sterile looking, which isn't a horrible thing. It looks amateur (and authentic) as it should, and I wouldn't say the niche is at all oversaturated yet (no pun intended). Personally, I'd probably go with a warmer feel, yet maintaining that "amateur/reality" look.

lorsha · 02-28-2003, 05:11 PM

Thanks Jimmy, but I don't know what pic you mean!

Could you maybe try to explain that one better. I don't have any with any kind of rope in my hair, hehe!

Lorsha

lorsha · 02-28-2003, 05:14 PM

Candy, unfortunately we use a program called IBM homepage builder. It is for html dummies like my hubby and I, hehe.

You need to be on standard "medium" font, and the text will be fine.

Lorsha

lorsha · 02-28-2003, 05:15 PM

Jeremy what do you mean by exits? Are you referring to my site navigation links on the bottom right? Or the exit pages on my tour?

Thanks!

Lorsha

TheJimmy · 02-28-2003, 05:16 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by lorsha
Thanks Jimmy, but I don't know what pic you mean!

Could you maybe try to explain that one better. I don't have any with any kind of rope in my hair, hehe!

Lorsha

lol you NAUGHTY NAUGHTY girl....

ditto to what SFJ said, warm it up a bit, and keep the reality/amateur feel....

JeremySF · 02-28-2003, 05:16 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by lorsha
Jeremy what do you mean by exits? Are you referring to my site navigation links on the bottom right? Or the exit pages on my tour?

Thanks!

Lorsha

The exit consoles. I think I got like 4 or 5 pop-ups when I left your site.

ZeNd · 02-28-2003, 05:16 PM

In my opinion it looks alot like cumswallowwife.com

p00p · 02-28-2003, 05:21 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by ZeNd
In my opinion it looks alot like cumswallowwife.com

Yes, they are very similar! I wonder who copied who?

lorsha · 02-28-2003, 05:21 PM

How do I warm it up Jimmy?

And Jeremy, that is because a couple of those sites, pop when you leave them. They are not my popups. I get no credit for them on the toplists. I will have my hubby look into that?

Lorsha

p00p · 02-28-2003, 05:33 PM

So who copied who?

lorsha · 02-28-2003, 05:36 PM

Hmm.... I do see some resemblance with cumswallowwife.com, but not that much.

Jimmy, do you mean this pic?
http://images.andale.com/f2/115/106/...6559_ppp43.jpg

Lorsha

Catalinas · 02-28-2003, 06:09 PM

Hmmm.. yeah, I wonder who copied who? Lorsha, I'm pretty disappointed to see that. Especially since we offered to help you promote your site... hmm let's see, you don't want us to successfully promote your site like we did Amber's site, but you'll try to copy our success by stealing the design. Nice, classy move.

twistyneck · 02-28-2003, 06:09 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by lorsha
Hmm.... I do see some resemblance with cumswallowwife.com, but not that much.

Jimmy, do you mean this pic?
http://images.andale.com/f2/115/106/...6559_ppp43.jpg

Lorsha

Lovely.

TheJimmy · 02-28-2003, 06:12 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by lorsha
Hmm.... I do see some resemblance with cumswallowwife.com, but not that much.

Jimmy, do you mean this pic?
http://images.andale.com/f2/115/106/...6559_ppp43.jpg

Lorsha

with this niche I've found that 'the messier' the face the better

and that was a pretty messy shot hehe

Easton · 02-28-2003, 06:14 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by JeremySF

The exit consoles. I think I got like 4 or 5 pop-ups when I left your site.

welcome to the amateur niche... it's standard practice

lorsha · 02-28-2003, 06:14 PM

Whoa catalina COPIED the design??

Short of using a FONT that I liked on cumswallowwife.com, in what way did I COPY it????

Gimme a break............

Lorsha

421Fill · 02-28-2003, 06:15 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by p00p

Yes, they are very similar! I wonder who copied who?

I do not copy.

lorsha · 02-28-2003, 06:18 PM

Does anyone else honestly think that I "copied" their design?

Please let me know. I honestly don't get it.

Lorsha

CrazyNakedChick · 02-28-2003, 06:20 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Easton

welcome to the amateur niche... it's standard practice

preach on brother easton, hahaha.

Catalinas · 02-28-2003, 06:21 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by lorsha
Whoa catalina COPIED the design??

Short of using a FONT that I liked on cumswallowwife.com, in what way did I COPY it????

Gimme a break............

Lorsha

Your staggering intelligence continues to amaze me...

carry on with your bad self.. you go girl! I'll take the high road on this one, since I don't have anything to prove

lorsha · 02-28-2003, 06:32 PM

This is INCREDBILY insulting!

http://www.lorshasworld.com/mainpurple.htm is a page that we have had up, LONG before cumswallowwife.com was ever born.

Maybe I should be accusing you of stealing my design??? Do you not see how silly this is?

Lorsha

lorsha · 02-28-2003, 06:34 PM

Can someone tell me, why it says "I scan my content from penthouse", under my name?

Lorsha

421Fill · 02-28-2003, 06:37 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by lorsha
This is INCREDBILY insulting!

http://www.lorshasworld.com/mainpurple.htm is a page that we have had up, LONG before cumswallowwife.com was ever born.

Maybe I should be accusing you of stealing my design??? Do you not see how silly this is?

Lorsha

This only shows that the elements in question were not on your site before. Thanks.

lorsha · 02-28-2003, 06:37 PM

"New owner of GFY" ?

Okay....now I'm REALLY confused!

Lorsha

p00p · 02-28-2003, 06:39 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by lorsha
"New owner of GFY" ?

Okay....now I'm REALLY confused!

Lorsha

You can't set your title until after 1000 posts.

I will try keep this thread going for you so you can closer reach that milestone.

lorsha · 02-28-2003, 06:41 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by turbo

This only shows that the elements in question were not on your site before. Thanks.

Elements in question? A FU***NG Font? Geezus......my hubby can't use the same FONT as another site??? Gimme a freaking break. This is REALLY getting out of hand......

........Oh yeah.......I'm going to have my husband COPY A SITE, then go ADVERTISE it on the biggest freaking adult forum on the internet. Sure.........

Lorsha

Easton · 02-28-2003, 06:41 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by lorsha
"New owner of GFY" ?

Okay....now I'm REALLY confused!

Lorsha

try eating more cum

p00p · 02-28-2003, 06:42 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by turbo

I do not copy.

No matter what happened, I think you would stand to lose more by copying someone elses work.
It doesn't seem too many people start websites from scratch anymore.

421Fill · 02-28-2003, 06:42 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by lorsha

Elements in question? A FU***NG Font? Geezus......my hubby can't use the same FONT as another site??? Gimme a freaking break. This is REALLY getting out of hand......

........Oh yeah.......I'm going to have my husband COPY A SITE, then go ADVERTISE it on the biggest freaking adult forum on the internet. Sure.........

Lorsha

no, it's not just a font. Do I really need to take screen caps and circle things??

CrazyNakedChick · 02-28-2003, 06:43 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by p00p

No matter what happened, I think you would stand to lose more by copying someone elses work.
It doesn't seem too many people start websites from scratch anymore.

hahaha, you obviously haven't seen my wreck of an amateur site.

Easton · 02-28-2003, 06:44 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by CrazyNakedChick

hahaha, you obviously haven't seen my wreck of an amateur site.

URL please? i'll show you mine if you show me yours!

ZeNd · 02-28-2003, 06:46 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by lorsha

Elements in question? A FU***NG Font? Geezus......my hubby can't use the same FONT as another site??? Gimme a freaking break. This is REALLY getting out of hand......

........Oh yeah.......I'm going to have my husband COPY A SITE, then go ADVERTISE it on the biggest freaking adult forum on the internet. Sure.........

Lorsha

Well let's just say you wouldn't be the first to do something like that LOL!

lorsha · 02-28-2003, 06:46 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by turbo

no, it's not just a font. Do I really need to take screen caps and circle things??

Oh Turbo GIVE ME A BREAK.

I said in the beginning of this thread, that I do see some similarities. NOT DENYING IT! NOT DENYING IT! Can you read that????? Just in case you can't........ NOT DENYING IT!

But copying it??? Please..........

Lorsha

p00p · 02-28-2003, 06:46 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by CrazyNakedChick

hahaha, you obviously haven't seen my wreck of an amateur site.

Hey, is that your pussy in the pics?

CrazyNakedChick · 02-28-2003, 06:48 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Easton

URL please? i'll show you mine if you show me yours!

www.AmbersAmateurHardcore.com (has an exit pop)

tag, you're it!

CrazyNakedChick · 02-28-2003, 06:49 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by p00p

Hey, is that your pussy in the pics?

which pics?

Easton · 02-28-2003, 06:54 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by CrazyNakedChick

www.AmbersAmateurHardcore.com (has an exit pop)

tag, you're it!

thanks for the pop-up warning... it was pretty painless

looks cool, btw very nice boobs

Vox · 02-28-2003, 06:55 PM

This is what I see on my 1024 x 768 settings.

Tala · 02-28-2003, 06:56 PM

Lorsha looks alot like the exwife of a good friend of mine. Creepy.

Lorsha, hit me up on Q and let me see if I can help you with some of your design troubles. In certain resolutions, your text overlaps and looks bad.

Or I can point you in the direction of a couple of really good designers...

p00p · 02-28-2003, 06:57 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by CrazyNakedChick

which pics?

on your WWW on your post it goes to crazynakedchick.com
But, I see your site. Is that REALLY you??

CrazyNakedChick · 02-28-2003, 06:59 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Easton

thanks for the pop-up warning... it was pretty painless

looks cool, btw very nice boobs

hehe, thanks.

checking yours out now....slinkylinks i presume?

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CrazyNakedChick · 02-28-2003, 07:01 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by p00p

on your WWW on your post it goes to crazynakedchick.com
But, I see your site. Is that REALLY you??

the two pics at the top? yea that's me. those specific pics are from 4 weeks ago, a live camshow i did for my am site.

lorsha · 02-28-2003, 07:01 PM

Thanks so much Vox, and tala.

Unfortunately that is how our IBM homepage builder works. It builds the HTML for us, and it only works on "medium" font.

Fortunately that is the deault setting for I.E, so we don't have too many complaints about it.

Lorsha

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Easton · 02-28-2003, 07:05 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by CrazyNakedChick

hehe, thanks.

checking yours out now....slinkylinks i presume?

correct... it's part TG and part collection of recent girls i've done stuff to, all in the name of content...

you can also see my stunt cock work here:
www.herfirstgangbang.com
www.blowjobauditions.com
www.gotjizz.com
www.wefuckinpublic.com
www.videovirgin.com

etc... (don't blame me for the pop-ups on all those)

02-28-2003, 04:55 PM	#1
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TheJimmy ICQ- five seven 0 2 5 5 0 Join Date: Jan 2001 Posts: 10,747	I'm a fan of the amateur facial niche.... but one thing I remember that is not on this version, is the image where you have some 'rope' laid down streaking across and into your hair, that was a real 'dirty dirty' pic.... I'd add that back somewhere, other than that you got that 'amateur' facial site going on... should work just fine I'd imagine... __________________ Investor with 5m - 15m USD to invest. Do you have a site or network of sites earning 50k - 200k a month income? Email your contact and preliminary data to: domain.cashventures (at) gmail.com....Please...no tire kickers...serious offers and inquiries only.

02-28-2003, 04:59 PM	#3
lorsha Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 529	Thanks Jimmy, but I don't know what pic you mean! Could you maybe try to explain that one better. I don't have any with any kind of rope in my hair, hehe! Lorsha __________________ Girls Make Their Debuts On My HD Site Site With Unique Personality; Converts & Retains Sign Up Here: Sexy Milf Money IN HD!

02-28-2003, 05:03 PM	#4
candyflip Carpe Visio Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: New York Posts: 43,061	I remember the pic Jimmy Anyhow...I'm on my Powerbook at the momnet, and the page doesn't look so hot. Some of the text from some table rows are being displayed in (overtop of) other table rows. Just a big jumbled mess. I like where you're going with it, just take a look at what I said... I'm using IE 5.1 for Mac OS9 __________________ Spend you some brain. Email Me

02-28-2003, 05:11 PM	#6
lorsha Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 529	Thanks Jimmy, but I don't know what pic you mean! Could you maybe try to explain that one better. I don't have any with any kind of rope in my hair, hehe! Lorsha __________________ Girls Make Their Debuts On My HD Site Site With Unique Personality; Converts & Retains Sign Up Here: Sexy Milf Money IN HD!

02-28-2003, 05:14 PM	#7
lorsha Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 529	Candy, unfortunately we use a program called IBM homepage builder. It is for html dummies like my hubby and I, hehe. You need to be on standard "medium" font, and the text will be fine. Lorsha __________________ Girls Make Their Debuts On My HD Site Site With Unique Personality; Converts & Retains Sign Up Here: Sexy Milf Money IN HD!

02-28-2003, 05:15 PM	#8
lorsha Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 529	Jeremy what do you mean by exits? Are you referring to my site navigation links on the bottom right? Or the exit pages on my tour? Thanks! Lorsha __________________ Girls Make Their Debuts On My HD Site Site With Unique Personality; Converts & Retains Sign Up Here: Sexy Milf Money IN HD!

02-28-2003, 05:16 PM	#11
ZeNd Registered User Join Date: Mar 2002 Posts: 50	In my opinion it looks alot like cumswallowwife.com

02-28-2003, 05:21 PM	#13
lorsha Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 529	How do I warm it up Jimmy? And Jeremy, that is because a couple of those sites, pop when you leave them. They are not my popups. I get no credit for them on the toplists. I will have my hubby look into that? Lorsha __________________ Girls Make Their Debuts On My HD Site Site With Unique Personality; Converts & Retains Sign Up Here: Sexy Milf Money IN HD!

02-28-2003, 05:33 PM	#14
p00p Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: CanaDUH Posts: 5,125	So who copied who?

02-28-2003, 05:36 PM	#15
lorsha Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 529	Hmm.... I do see some resemblance with cumswallowwife.com, but not that much. Jimmy, do you mean this pic? http://images.andale.com/f2/115/106/...6559_ppp43.jpg Lorsha __________________ Girls Make Their Debuts On My HD Site Site With Unique Personality; Converts & Retains Sign Up Here: Sexy Milf Money IN HD!

02-28-2003, 06:09 PM	#16
Catalinas Registered User Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Las Vegas, Nevada Posts: 346	Hmmm.. yeah, I wonder who copied who? Lorsha, I'm pretty disappointed to see that. Especially since we offered to help you promote your site... hmm let's see, you don't want us to successfully promote your site like we did Amber's site, but you'll try to copy our success by stealing the design. Nice, classy move.

02-28-2003, 06:14 PM	#20
lorsha Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 529	Whoa catalina COPIED the design?? Short of using a FONT that I liked on cumswallowwife.com, in what way did I COPY it???? Gimme a break............ Lorsha __________________ Girls Make Their Debuts On My HD Site Site With Unique Personality; Converts & Retains Sign Up Here: Sexy Milf Money IN HD!

02-28-2003, 06:18 PM	#22
lorsha Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 529	Does anyone else honestly think that I "copied" their design? Please let me know. I honestly don't get it. Lorsha __________________ Girls Make Their Debuts On My HD Site Site With Unique Personality; Converts & Retains Sign Up Here: Sexy Milf Money IN HD!

02-28-2003, 06:32 PM	#25
lorsha Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 529	This is INCREDBILY insulting! http://www.lorshasworld.com/mainpurple.htm is a page that we have had up, LONG before cumswallowwife.com was ever born. Maybe I should be accusing you of stealing my design??? Do you not see how silly this is? Lorsha __________________ Girls Make Their Debuts On My HD Site Site With Unique Personality; Converts & Retains Sign Up Here: Sexy Milf Money IN HD!

02-28-2003, 06:34 PM	#26
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lorsha Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 529	Thanks so much Vox, and tala. Unfortunately that is how our IBM homepage builder works. It builds the HTML for us, and it only works on "medium" font. Fortunately that is the deault setting for I.E, so we don't have too many complaints about it. Lorsha __________________ Girls Make Their Debuts On My HD Site Site With Unique Personality; Converts & Retains Sign Up Here: Sexy Milf Money IN HD!

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