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NakedWomenTime · 12-14-2015, 06:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SIK

no one will read that pile of text

NO ONE.

EVER.

TRUST ME.

Well, I guess I largely agree, but you never know. What I am trying to do is get a lot text content onto the blog.

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