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jcrow · 01-15-2004, 04:07 PM

Hi All

We are start drawing cartoon.
here: http://www.best-studios.com/cartoon/index.html first 6 pictures.
Please, tell me what you think.

thanks in advance!

Juicy D. Links · 01-15-2004, 04:10 PM

your sig makes me hard

powerbubba · 01-15-2004, 04:17 PM

more artistic than erotic, but maybe that's your goal

jcrow · 01-15-2004, 04:19 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by juicylinks
your sig makes me hard

sorry

I change it.

but, what you think about pictures, maybe you have some suggestions?

thank you!

$hurik · 01-15-2004, 04:21 PM

To my opinion, should be more realistic. Now it looks more like dolls

J-Reel · 01-15-2004, 04:22 PM

Intersting

jcrow · 01-15-2004, 04:25 PM

it's first pictures, so I'am very need in your comments now.

thank you guys!

Vitasoy · 01-15-2004, 04:59 PM

Either make it more cartoony or more realistic... right now it's in between...

Greg B · 01-15-2004, 05:13 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by jcrow
Hi All

We are start drawing cartoon.
here: http://www.best-studios.com/cartoon/index.html first 6 pictures.
Please, tell me what you think.

thanks in advance!

Hey, keep up the good work.

myjah · 01-15-2004, 05:15 PM

they're cute. maybe i'm just not that into cartoons but they don't do alot for me.

MrIzzz · 01-15-2004, 05:18 PM

i like the style of the first two.

after that they get a little no-so-good

serious · 01-15-2004, 05:18 PM

i agree more realistic if possible

jcrow · 01-15-2004, 05:21 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Vitasoy
Either make it more cartoony or more realistic... right now it's in between...

thank you for the comment, I'll try

Quote:

Originally posted by Greg B
Hey, keep up the good work.

thank you for the kind words

Quote:

Originally posted by myjah
they're cute. maybe i'm just not that into cartoons but they don't do alot for me.

it's a first cartoons, I hope, I will make it much better very soon.

also, maybe somebody know any good cartoon tutorials?
I know this:
http://www.polykarbon.com/tutorials/index.htm

Rankings · 01-15-2004, 06:18 PM

cartoons aren't my fetish, but the artistic creation is great

Ironhorse · 01-15-2004, 06:27 PM

They're better than most, you can improve the linework make the black lines crisper, less faded looking.

Keep at it, looks like real potential.

alan-l · 01-15-2004, 06:58 PM

not good, sorry

dotwind · 01-15-2004, 07:02 PM

you should try working on it a bit more .. the shadows are not well done .. the face of the guy jerking off is also deformed and that's because of the sadows too.. but overall it's not bad for a start
good luck

Ic3m4nZ · 01-15-2004, 07:04 PM

looks good for a first timer

ruler1 · 01-15-2004, 07:36 PM

I"m sorry i didnt get any erection

but looks good even if i am not a cartoon fan.

skyb0lt · 01-15-2004, 07:45 PM

I usually get hard if the wind blows, but your pics did nothing for me. They need to be more detailed, relastic, or more like a toon. RIght now they are artsy.

Your not trying to get them put on walls, your trying to get them on monitors.

Really, I like the characters. They're uniqe and should be catchy if you can get the art right.

Good luck!

SkyB0lt

jcrow · 01-16-2004, 03:59 AM

thank you for all your comments and suggestions,
it helps me to make next cartoons better!

Anybody knows good sites with cartoon tutorials?
please post url's.

thank you!

Kicker · 01-16-2004, 04:50 AM

Looks original

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01-16-2004, 03:59 AM	#21
jcrow Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: mars Posts: 121	thank you for all your comments and suggestions, it helps me to make next cartoons better! Anybody knows good sites with cartoon tutorials? please post url's. thank you! __________________ ICQ: 92312854 - email: [email protected] Adult Design Studio - Adult Galleries - Non Adult Design Studio - EasyPaySite Content Manager - TGP turnkeys

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