Ok, What do you think of this song..? AGAIN! - GoFuckYourself.com

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE · 02-18-2009, 07:10 PM

First time there was a audio issue... It is fixed and is much clearer now.. Also note, this song is not the final..

Thanks for your input..

candyflip · 02-18-2009, 07:12 PM

I'm willing to bet you get the same feedback.

WarChild · 02-18-2009, 07:13 PM

You're a failure of epic levels.

candyflip · 02-18-2009, 07:18 PM

I see I have already been proven correct.

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE · 02-18-2009, 07:24 PM

Thanks for the feedback...

420 · 02-18-2009, 07:26 PM

Is that Mindwaste aka T-Rain mumbling on there?

spacedog · 02-18-2009, 08:48 PM

take out the vocals and it'll sound much better..

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE · 02-18-2009, 10:11 PM

Great feedback.. Bump for more..

Poindexterity · 02-18-2009, 10:50 PM

YOU DID ME WRONG!!!

i liked it except for the early 80's amateur miami
producer stock keyboard sounds beat.
that and the same ol same ol
commercial fronting and rhymin common rhymes
like this how far we go and i gotta let you know
and yadda yadda yadda

and the fact that the cell phone ring is the loudest thing in the whole song.

yeah, total butt pee to be brief.

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE · 02-18-2009, 11:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Poindexterity

YOU DID ME WRONG!!!

i liked it except for the early 80's amateur miami
producer stock keyboard sounds beat.
that and the same ol same ol
commercial fronting and rhymin common rhymes
like this how far we go and i gotta let you know
and yadda yadda yadda

and the fact that the cell phone ring is the loudest thing in the whole song.

yeah, total butt pee to be brief.

Great input.. Thanks

ExLust · 02-19-2009, 12:43 AM

Hhahaha, bump for more.

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE · 02-19-2009, 01:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ExLust

Hhahaha, bump for more.

Thanks for the bump...

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE · 02-19-2009, 04:06 AM

bump.. bump...

nico-t · 02-19-2009, 05:59 AM

t-rain is way better you shoud sign him

nico-t · 02-19-2009, 06:05 AM

i used to be better than all of you btw: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...m?bandID=37427

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE · 02-19-2009, 06:26 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by nico-t

t-rain is way better you shoud sign him

Quote:

Originally Posted by nico-t

i used to be better than all of you btw: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...m?bandID=37427

Not bad..

munki · 02-19-2009, 06:36 AM

I think I like this one:

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE · 02-19-2009, 08:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by munki

I think I like this one:

tranza · 02-19-2009, 10:18 AM

Fail thread

$5 submissions · 02-19-2009, 06:02 PM

The keyboards didn't do it for me.

Si · 02-19-2009, 06:07 PM

that is fucking terrible!

I hope your not really thinking of pushing this shit

candyflip · 02-19-2009, 06:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mobilefun1987

that is fucking terrible!

I hope your not really thinking of pushing this shit

Wot u talkin' bout? That is some major label shit right there.

It even says so on his MySpace.

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE · 02-19-2009, 07:07 PM

Thanks for all the feedback.. I can't wait to show Nonsentz..

Looks like we need the beat redone... Him to work on sounding less commercial.. And work with his tonality a bit...

Keep them coming guys... Nonsentz needs this criticism... Everyone locally thinks he is the hottest thing around and hardly criticizes him...

It was funny cause we were talking about it the other day.. I told him I am going to post that song a place were critics will come out by the dozens..

Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE · 02-19-2009, 10:29 PM

The feedback was perfect.. We welcome more.. I showed this thread to Nonsentz.. He loved the criticism.. Just what he needs..

02-18-2009, 07:10 PM	#1
Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE North Coast Pimp Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: 304-534-757 Posts: 9,395	Ok, What do you think of this song..? AGAIN! First time there was a audio issue... It is fixed and is much clearer now.. Also note, this song is not the final.. Thanks for your input..

02-18-2009, 07:12 PM	#2
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02-18-2009, 07:24 PM	#5
Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE North Coast Pimp Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: 304-534-757 Posts: 9,395	Thanks for the feedback...

02-18-2009, 08:48 PM	#7
spacedog Yes that IS me. Bitch. Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2001 Posts: 14,149	take out the vocals and it'll sound much better..

02-18-2009, 10:11 PM	#8
Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE North Coast Pimp Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: 304-534-757 Posts: 9,395	Great feedback.. Bump for more..

02-18-2009, 10:50 PM	#9
Poindexterity Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: America's butthole, TX Posts: 882	YOU DID ME WRONG!!! i liked it except for the early 80's amateur miami producer stock keyboard sounds beat. that and the same ol same ol commercial fronting and rhymin common rhymes like this how far we go and i gotta let you know and yadda yadda yadda and the fact that the cell phone ring is the loudest thing in the whole song. yeah, total butt pee to be brief.

02-19-2009, 12:43 AM	#11
ExLust Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 3,223	Hhahaha, bump for more. __________________ BE A PARTNER

02-19-2009, 04:06 AM	#13
Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE North Coast Pimp Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: 304-534-757 Posts: 9,395	bump.. bump...

02-19-2009, 05:59 AM	#14
nico-t emperor of my world Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: nethalands Posts: 29,903	t-rain is way better you shoud sign him

02-19-2009, 06:05 AM	#15
nico-t emperor of my world Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: nethalands Posts: 29,903	i used to be better than all of you btw: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/defa...m?bandID=37427

02-19-2009, 06:36 AM	#17
munki Do Fun Shit. Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: OC Posts: 13,393	I think I like this one: __________________ “I have the simplest tastes. I am always satisfied with the best.” -Oscar Wilde

02-19-2009, 10:18 AM	#19
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02-19-2009, 06:07 PM	#21
Si Such Fun! Industry Role: Join Date: Feb 2008 Posts: 13,900	that is fucking terrible! I hope your not really thinking of pushing this shit

02-19-2009, 07:07 PM	#23
Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE North Coast Pimp Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: 304-534-757 Posts: 9,395	Thanks for all the feedback.. I can't wait to show Nonsentz.. Looks like we need the beat redone... Him to work on sounding less commercial.. And work with his tonality a bit... Keep them coming guys... Nonsentz needs this criticism... Everyone locally thinks he is the hottest thing around and hardly criticizes him... It was funny cause we were talking about it the other day.. I told him I am going to post that song a place were critics will come out by the dozens..

02-19-2009, 10:29 PM	#24
Jon Clark - BANNED FOR LIFE North Coast Pimp Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: 304-534-757 Posts: 9,395	The feedback was perfect.. We welcome more.. I showed this thread to Nonsentz.. He loved the criticism.. Just what he needs..