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Old 02-12-2010, 09:18 PM   #1
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Can you review my website

i will input my vod and member section next week www.eldiablodvd.com and i wil use the same template for 2 other membership website . with www.patriciapetite.com i will be able to start with 200 scenes . 140 of those scenes are complete exclusive . if anybody wants to work with me as reference , just let me know
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Old 02-12-2010, 09:29 PM   #2
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one of the nicer looking sites I've seen in a while, cool logo, hot chicks, nice clean layout
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Old 02-13-2010, 01:02 AM   #3
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Ok. You asked..

Logo is terrible...
flames are shit
toon is shit
can barely read the actual text
random red lines?

BUT, the version of the logo in the trailers is ok.

Header is WAY too big..
NO content at all above the fold.
Girls in the header were extracted shitty
whole thing just looks ugly (no call to action)

The French and English text is not a terrible idea, but confusing the way it's done.

The layout of the actual content isn't too bad, but if the header were done correctly, and the content moved up, then it could be organized a bit better.

People will probably say the surfers don't care about the logo, but that is your brand. Also the domain is eldiablo but the "el" in the logo is almost invisible. That shit needs to be clear so it sticks in their brains like a magnet.

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Old 02-13-2010, 02:47 AM   #4
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i'll redesign it
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Old 02-13-2010, 06:08 PM   #5
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i'll redesign it
probably just wanted to hear "looks great"
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Old 02-13-2010, 06:53 PM   #6
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Ok. You asked..

Logo is terrible...
flames are shit
toon is shit
can barely read the actual text
random red lines?

BUT, the version of the logo in the trailers is ok.

Header is WAY too big..
NO content at all above the fold.
Girls in the header were extracted shitty
whole thing just looks ugly (no call to action)

The French and English text is not a terrible idea, but confusing the way it's done.

The layout of the actual content isn't too bad, but if the header were done correctly, and the content moved up, then it could be organized a bit better.

People will probably say the surfers don't care about the logo, but that is your brand. Also the domain is eldiablo but the "el" in the logo is almost invisible. That shit needs to be clear so it sticks in their brains like a magnet.

I'm gonna hafta go ahead and sort of agree with that here. Yeah.

The other site, Patricia Petite, is possibly worse.

Bad logo
Bad color scheme
Atrocious typography
Bad layout
Bad image masking
Non-existent color correction
inconsistent effects (shadows)
Wanton abuse of the "Glow" filter
Bad random spacing of just about everything

I have to stop. It's burning my eyes.
Sorry, but the whole thing should be deleted with military grade prejudice and started over.

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Old 02-13-2010, 08:39 PM   #7
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I'd prefer it if you removed the traffic leaks at the bottom of the page.
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Old 02-14-2010, 07:48 AM   #8
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Which company designed these sites?

How much did they charge you?
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Old 02-15-2010, 12:05 PM   #9
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Old 02-15-2010, 12:57 PM   #10
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I would resize the DVD box thumbnails to fill in some of that negative space. The video also didn't download very fast, and I am on a T1 line (used Firefox).
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Old 02-15-2010, 01:22 PM   #11
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looks pretty good
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Old 02-15-2010, 01:28 PM   #12
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Rough crowd. The girls in the header are definitely hot, the graphic itself is kind of "tall". The way the site starts out in a confined manner then drops out to a background intensive lower half makes it less cohesive than it could be.
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Old 02-16-2010, 08:56 AM   #13
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thanks for you comment .i have better version of my logo... i will change it . the patriciapetite.com gonna be completely shut down and remake wiyh new color and logo.
maybe i should work on header and grafic , but its sex i trying to sold , and i have very good content , soft ,hardcore and fetish . i work on that and i will combeback for a new review when my 3 membership will be online. thanks to taking time to review my site
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