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newbiewebmistress · 01-16-2003, 11:25 AM

Okay here I go again. I finally got most of my site, Phonetease , together, just looking for more sponsors and what not. But I would like to know what you all think of my site. What could I do to make it better? Am I missing something legally? What big webmaster rule(s) am I breaking? What kind of site is it? Paysite, AVS? I started the site as a way for me to promote my phone sex line. (Callers will call me through another service online, but they'll get access to my free pics after they call.) I don't use an adult verification system because in order to call me, they have to enter a credit card to prove that they are over 18.

Please check out my site and give me feedback. I want honest answers, positive or negative. But please don't flame me. I am still a newbie, hence the name)

I notice my site doesn't look as pretty or professional as other sites, can someone give me some pointers?

Rex · 01-16-2003, 02:18 PM

ok the first page is a little shocking because the font is huge and not very well formatted. The second page has like three paragrahs that nobody is going to read no matter how hot that chick is. You need to make it as easy as possible for these people. Remember the surfer has his dick in his hand and the last thing he wants to do is read. Examples are the best way. I was on your page for 1 minute and I don't even know what you are trying to do. Is it a pay site? Also check out Macromedia Dreamweaver - it works wonders!

DirkMagnum · 01-16-2003, 07:08 PM

yikes!

that's too "in your face" i didn't even make it past the first page as I'm sure many won't. take some web design courses at your local community college. tis my advice.

-D

01-16-2003, 08:08 PM

That first warning page is really a mess.

Here's something I threw together quickly to clean up your first page. Feel free to save it and use it if you want.

http://www.loadedgirls.com/phonetease.htm

Keep in mind that thing you did with the scrolling bars for the terms and conditions won't display right in Netscape.

(I'll just keep the page up for a day or two then I'll delete it in case you want to use it.)

I would also get rid of Microsoft Frontpage. It really sucks ass. If you want a free html editor I would recommend Netscape Composer. It's still not great but it doesn't insert as much garbage code as frontpage.

You should also talk to some of the designers on here about maybe getting a cool logo made up. Probably wouldn't cost you more than $50.

Darkhorse · 01-17-2003, 03:04 AM

Yep the Index page is way to in your face, aslo you should have it at a resolution of 800X600.

I don't like going from pink to black, the colors just don't work.

I got lost as soon as I hit your main page, as I'm sure others did and will.

I am not saying your site sucks or anything, it just needs some structure.

I am on Icq most nights if you want or need some help with the design.

Regards, Darkhorse

adamneve · 01-17-2003, 06:58 AM

lose that big text for sure!!!

newbiewebmistress · 01-17-2003, 12:11 PM

Thank you all for your advice. I appreciate it ALOT!
I do want to do the logo thing. But unfortunately, I only have enough funds to get advertising. I am a super new webmistress and I was kind of hoping that I would earn some money/make some profit from it first, then move on to upgrading it later. Does this make sense or is it too big a risk?
Evildick, thank you soo much for creating that page and letting me use it. I would like to thank you. Because I don't have money, yet. I would like to give you credit on the warning page, 'This webpage's design was created by " _your name goes here_", right under or around the copyright . I really like it. It looks 900X's better than what I had.

P.S. Darkhorse, I will gladly take you up on your offer, once I figure out what ICQ is and how to get one!

01-17-2003, 01:31 PM

Don't worry about it.

Here's a free logo too. Not the greatest but that's what you get for free and 10 minutes work.

I was bored.

01-17-2003, 03:02 PM

Actually if you like the logo and the page, you could repay me by changing the "exit" link on your main page to point to:

http://www.interneteraser.com/enter.html?ID=6631064

You were just sending them to yahoo anyway.

newbiewebmistress · 01-18-2003, 12:35 PM

Evildick, I added it. Thanks for the logo. I have a question though. (as usual)
Now that I have a logo, what do I do with it? How do I use it I mean? Does it serve the purpose of a banner? Or something else?

newbiewebmistress · 01-18-2003, 12:49 PM

Also, I redid the main page after the waning page, does it make more sense. I put an example on it and turned the old section to an About Us page. Please see if it's any better.

01-18-2003, 01:38 PM

I thought you could just put it on your site.

Instead of the pink text on the index page, slap that logo up there.

Maybe replace this one:

http://www.phonetease.com/phonetease%20banner.jpg

with the new one if you think it looks better.

01-16-2003, 11:25 AM	#1
newbiewebmistress Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 162	I would like feedback on my first adult site. What would an everyday surfer say? Okay here I go again. I finally got most of my site, Phonetease , together, just looking for more sponsors and what not. But I would like to know what you all think of my site. What could I do to make it better? Am I missing something legally? What big webmaster rule(s) am I breaking? What kind of site is it? Paysite, AVS? I started the site as a way for me to promote my phone sex line. (Callers will call me through another service online, but they'll get access to my free pics after they call.) I don't use an adult verification system because in order to call me, they have to enter a credit card to prove that they are over 18. Please check out my site and give me feedback. I want honest answers, positive or negative. But please don't flame me. I am still a newbie, hence the name) I notice my site doesn't look as pretty or professional as other sites, can someone give me some pointers?

01-16-2003, 02:18 PM	#2
Rex Confirmed User Join Date: May 2002 Location: ohio Posts: 2,241	ok the first page is a little shocking because the font is huge and not very well formatted. The second page has like three paragrahs that nobody is going to read no matter how hot that chick is. You need to make it as easy as possible for these people. Remember the surfer has his dick in his hand and the last thing he wants to do is read. Examples are the best way. I was on your page for 1 minute and I don't even know what you are trying to do. Is it a pay site? Also check out Macromedia Dreamweaver - it works wonders! __________________ I don't own RexMag anymore.

01-16-2003, 08:08 PM	#4
evildick Guest Posts: n/a	That first warning page is really a mess. Here's something I threw together quickly to clean up your first page. Feel free to save it and use it if you want. http://www.loadedgirls.com/phonetease.htm Keep in mind that thing you did with the scrolling bars for the terms and conditions won't display right in Netscape. (I'll just keep the page up for a day or two then I'll delete it in case you want to use it.) I would also get rid of Microsoft Frontpage. It really sucks ass. If you want a free html editor I would recommend Netscape Composer. It's still not great but it doesn't insert as much garbage code as frontpage. You should also talk to some of the designers on here about maybe getting a cool logo made up. Probably wouldn't cost you more than $50. Last edited by evildick; 01-16-2003 at 08:13 PM..

01-17-2003, 06:58 AM	#6
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01-17-2003, 12:11 PM	#7
newbiewebmistress Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 162	Thank you all for your advice. I appreciate it ALOT! I do want to do the logo thing. But unfortunately, I only have enough funds to get advertising. I am a super new webmistress and I was kind of hoping that I would earn some money/make some profit from it first, then move on to upgrading it later. Does this make sense or is it too big a risk? Evildick, thank you soo much for creating that page and letting me use it. I would like to thank you. Because I don't have money, yet. I would like to give you credit on the warning page, 'This webpage's design was created by " _your name goes here_", right under or around the copyright . I really like it. It looks 900X's better than what I had. P.S. Darkhorse, I will gladly take you up on your offer, once I figure out what ICQ is and how to get one! Last edited by newbiewebmistress; 01-17-2003 at 12:14 PM..

01-16-2003, 07:08 PM	#3
DirkMagnum Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: behind your monitor Posts: 145	yikes! that's too "in your face" i didn't even make it past the first page as I'm sure many won't. take some web design courses at your local community college. tis my advice. -D

01-17-2003, 03:04 AM	#5
Darkhorse Horsing Around Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: AU Posts: 5,862	Yep the Index page is way to in your face, aslo you should have it at a resolution of 800X600. I don't like going from pink to black, the colors just don't work. I got lost as soon as I hit your main page, as I'm sure others did and will. I am not saying your site sucks or anything, it just needs some structure. I am on Icq most nights if you want or need some help with the design. Regards, Darkhorse

01-17-2003, 01:31 PM	#8
evildick Guest Posts: n/a	Don't worry about it. Here's a free logo too. Not the greatest but that's what you get for free and 10 minutes work. I was bored.

01-17-2003, 03:02 PM	#9
evildick Guest Posts: n/a	Actually if you like the logo and the page, you could repay me by changing the "exit" link on your main page to point to: http://www.interneteraser.com/enter.html?ID=6631064 You were just sending them to yahoo anyway.

01-18-2003, 12:35 PM	#10
newbiewebmistress Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 162	Evildick, I added it. Thanks for the logo. I have a question though. (as usual) Now that I have a logo, what do I do with it? How do I use it I mean? Does it serve the purpose of a banner? Or something else?

01-18-2003, 12:49 PM	#11
newbiewebmistress Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 162	Also, I redid the main page after the waning page, does it make more sense. I put an example on it and turned the old section to an About Us page. Please see if it's any better.

01-18-2003, 01:38 PM	#12
evildick Guest Posts: n/a	I thought you could just put it on your site. Instead of the pink text on the index page, slap that logo up there. Maybe replace this one: http://www.phonetease.com/phonetease%20banner.jpg with the new one if you think it looks better. Last edited by evildick; 01-18-2003 at 01:42 PM..