Join-Page design help - GoFuckYourself.com

johnciacci · 11-27-2008, 07:15 AM

I need some help with the join page also.
The form looks all right but the rest is just messy.
I had the marketing info in just text but it looked too cramped.

Let me know what you think!

V 2.0
fotofap.com/view/full/547860_tumm5

V 1.0
fotofap.com/view/full/547861_m07ly

?Jc

ovidiu_webcams · 11-27-2008, 09:07 AM

For me v1 is way better... what I don't like are the buttons (that is what breaks v2 - making the marketing content look like buttons).
The size is exaggerated and too many effects placed on them with what looks like almost maximum parameters applied (especially on bevel). It works for the "Choose your membership plan" tho

johnciacci · 11-27-2008, 09:21 AM

Okay. I'll scrap v2 and just add some more space for the desc text on V1, i'll get rid of button and just move Form up.

I just don't know how much marketing crap to put underneath.
I can just design a page like this site where it's part of the tour.

tinyass.com/bonus.php

Are videos on the join page annoying also? They seem to distract from the actual function of the page.

johnciacci · 11-27-2008, 11:15 AM

I think I have it in V3 - cleaner - Small photos on bottom are just FPO.
What does everyone think?

copy & paste»
fotofap.com/view/full/548386_lqrdw

We also need to hire a freelance copywriter -- does anyone have any experience in this style off creative writing. We had a copy writer on V 1.0 of the site but he is no longer available.

WE PAY! So send me a message via GFY with your rates. v2.0 will be ready Dec 06 and then when have to go through the tweaks. But hope to be fully live end-of-december.

ovidiu_webcams · 11-27-2008, 12:43 PM

Yeah... v3 looks better... keep up the good work

Cheers

johnciacci · 11-28-2008, 04:25 AM

Hi!

did you see the post about the member log in page? Just need some creative advice
I'll forward them to you!

fotofap.com/view/full/547779_dosjo

ovidiu_webcams · 11-28-2008, 05:22 AM

Here's how I'd modify that:
I would put the "Not a member yet" section underneath the login form...
The secret word image on the right side of the field the user suppose to enter that word
Would make the login button a little bigger and place it on the right side...
On the left side of the button the forgot password link would go....
Would bring username and password fields closer to each other..

Or variations on the above..
The thing is that I had to look for the login button for a sec before finding it and the user would search for the secret word image because is not visually related with the field. The "forgot password " is too invisible for me there.

johnciacci · 11-28-2008, 05:52 AM

version 4 here we go....

pornguy · 11-28-2008, 09:27 AM

fotofap.com/view/full/548386_lqrdw

This one looks nice, but make those little images at the bottom a little smaller. Thats almost enough for guys to jerk off to.

johnciacci · 11-28-2008, 10:27 AM

Here's Members Login v 3.0
Hopefully the link will work now that i'm off freehost.

I took out all the CAPTCHA don't know if we will even use it.
Seems most big sites just user NAME & PASS and cookies by my programmer said
no cookies.

Is there anything vitally important i'm leaving out?

I'm leaving the link here in case of any image problems.

http://wetandpuffy.com/new/gfy/login_v3.jpg

11-27-2008, 07:15 AM	#1
johnciacci Registered User Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: California Posts: 85	Join-Page design help I need some help with the join page also. The form looks all right but the rest is just messy. I had the marketing info in just text but it looked too cramped. Let me know what you think! V 2.0 fotofap.com/view/full/547860_tumm5 V 1.0 fotofap.com/view/full/547861_m07ly ?Jc __________________ wetandpuffy.com \| ICQ» 408911220

11-27-2008, 09:07 AM	#2
ovidiu_webcams Registered User Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 19	For me v1 is way better... what I don't like are the buttons (that is what breaks v2 - making the marketing content look like buttons). The size is exaggerated and too many effects placed on them with what looks like almost maximum parameters applied (especially on bevel). It works for the "Choose your membership plan" tho __________________ Sign up to webcams.com affiliate program

11-27-2008, 09:21 AM	#3
johnciacci Registered User Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: California Posts: 85	Okay. I'll scrap v2 and just add some more space for the desc text on V1, i'll get rid of button and just move Form up. I just don't know how much marketing crap to put underneath. I can just design a page like this site where it's part of the tour. tinyass.com/bonus.php Are videos on the join page annoying also? They seem to distract from the actual function of the page. __________________ wetandpuffy.com \| ICQ» 408911220

11-27-2008, 11:15 AM	#4
johnciacci Registered User Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: California Posts: 85	Eureka! I think I have it in V3 - cleaner - Small photos on bottom are just FPO. What does everyone think? copy & paste» fotofap.com/view/full/548386_lqrdw We also need to hire a freelance copywriter -- does anyone have any experience in this style off creative writing. We had a copy writer on V 1.0 of the site but he is no longer available. WE PAY! So send me a message via GFY with your rates. v2.0 will be ready Dec 06 and then when have to go through the tweaks. But hope to be fully live end-of-december. __________________ wetandpuffy.com \| ICQ» 408911220

11-27-2008, 12:43 PM	#5
ovidiu_webcams Registered User Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 19	Yeah... v3 looks better... keep up the good work Cheers __________________ Sign up to webcams.com affiliate program

11-28-2008, 04:25 AM	#6
johnciacci Registered User Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: California Posts: 85	Log In Page Hi! did you see the post about the member log in page? Just need some creative advice I'll forward them to you! fotofap.com/view/full/547779_dosjo __________________ wetandpuffy.com \| ICQ» 408911220

11-28-2008, 05:22 AM	#7
ovidiu_webcams Registered User Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 19	Here's how I'd modify that: I would put the "Not a member yet" section underneath the login form... The secret word image on the right side of the field the user suppose to enter that word Would make the login button a little bigger and place it on the right side... On the left side of the button the forgot password link would go.... Would bring username and password fields closer to each other.. Or variations on the above.. The thing is that I had to look for the login button for a sec before finding it and the user would search for the secret word image because is not visually related with the field. The "forgot password " is too invisible for me there. __________________ Sign up to webcams.com affiliate program

11-28-2008, 05:52 AM	#8
johnciacci Registered User Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: California Posts: 85	version 4 here we go.... __________________ wetandpuffy.com \| ICQ» 408911220

11-28-2008, 09:27 AM	#9
pornguy Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Homeless Posts: 62,911	fotofap.com/view/full/548386_lqrdw This one looks nice, but make those little images at the bottom a little smaller. Thats almost enough for guys to jerk off to. __________________ PornGuy skype me pornguy_epic AmateurDough The Hottes Shemales online! TChicks.com \| Angeles Cid \| Mariana Cordoba \| MAILERS WELCOME!

11-28-2008, 10:27 AM	#10
johnciacci Registered User Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: California Posts: 85	Here's Members Login v 3.0 Hopefully the link will work now that i'm off freehost. I took out all the CAPTCHA don't know if we will even use it. Seems most big sites just user NAME & PASS and cookies by my programmer said no cookies. Is there anything vitally important i'm leaving out? I'm leaving the link here in case of any image problems. http://wetandpuffy.com/new/gfy/login_v3.jpg __________________ wetandpuffy.com \| ICQ» 408911220